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"Each of the 112 students' data was neatly organized on a spreadsheet"

You could have omitted the 'data' and inserted 'as a line' before 'on'. Not a grammar check, but rather a snapshot the growing view of people themselves as data (points) only. Even worse when it's young, impressionable students being converted to data points.

Thanks for shedding some light on this.

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